There were originally some sound effects near Largo's scooter.
Sometimes you just have to give up and move on. This is one of those comics.
I just basically wiped all the dialogue of of it and went minimal. Maybe this works because i was trying to make the comic do too many things, which made it unwieldy and unworkable.
As an experiment, i removed the SFX from the page - they seemed to really make what was happening with largo harder to see than the original art showed... tho honestly, it is too small. but still, worth trying, so take a look